Things i couldn't find yet
I thought i could discover the feeling of being away from you
And i know that i miss you so much
But, after a few days, the pain starts to grow again
I couldn't find the cure for my heart
It's so hard to be caught in something like this
Without someone to know what's happening to me
I guess nobody can truly understand the way i feel
about something i couldn't find
And i know what it is
Two years ago i thought i have found it
But in the end it was a fucking ilussion
cheating me and taking everything from me
There's no one around that could understand
My reason of emptiness
I try to pretend that i'm happy
But i just want to cry every second
All my hopes from some strange force putting me in the right situation are down
Maybe i would die without the things i couldn't find yet
And i know that i miss you so much
But, after a few days, the pain starts to grow again
I couldn't find the cure for my heart
It's so hard to be caught in something like this
Without someone to know what's happening to me
I guess nobody can truly understand the way i feel
about something i couldn't find
And i know what it is
Two years ago i thought i have found it
But in the end it was a fucking ilussion
cheating me and taking everything from me
There's no one around that could understand
My reason of emptiness
I try to pretend that i'm happy
But i just want to cry every second
All my hopes from some strange force putting me in the right situation are down
Maybe i would die without the things i couldn't find yet
entrada de Luis C @ 20:50
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3 comentarios:
Grammar police:
*(not "i" it's "I" - "I's" are always capitalized)
*"I thought I could discover the feeling of being away from you" (consider revising)
*Two years ago I thought I HAD found it
*TRICKING/FOOLING me and taking everything from me (cheating me is not a thing)
*THE REASON OF MY EMPTINESS
*All my hopes FOR some strange force THAT PUTS me in the right situation (or perhaps TRACK?) are down. (or, "All my hopes ABOUT some strange force putting me in the right situation are down)
*Maybe I WILL die without the things I HAVEN'T FOUND yet
Alternatively, "Maybe I WILL die without the things I couldn't find (skip the "yet")
or leave it. (I now see that it is your poem's title. sorry.)
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